Pollen in 2018

Apr 5, 2018 10:59
Recently, I was surprised to watch news.

Eventually the peak of cedar pollen has passed, but cypress pollen will likely hit its peak soon.

Unfortunately, the amount of the cypress pollen this year seems 428 times more than the amount of last year.

Furthermore, this number is in Hachioji city, Tokyo, where I am living.

It is said that the increase in pollen level is due to the rapid temperature rise at the end of March 2018.

I think that the cause of my itchy eyes is this cypress pollen.

It is very hard for me to spend this pollen season.
2018年の花粉

先日、ニュースを見て驚きました。

ようやくスギ花粉のピークが過ぎましたが、次はヒノキ花粉がやってきます。

そしてこのヒノキ花粉、飛散の量が去年の428倍とのことです。

しかもこの数値、私が住んでいる八王子市内のものだそうです。

このようになった理由として、3月末の急激な気温の上昇が考えられます。

最近やたら目がかゆいのは、このヒノキ花粉が原因のようです。

辛いです。
No. 1　Cavish's correction
  • Recently, I was surprised to watch news.
  • Recently, I was surprised to see the news.
  • Eventually the peak of cedar pollen has passed, but cypress pollen will likely hit its peak soon.
  • The peak of cedar pollen has already passed, but cypress pollen will likely hit its peak soon.
    　I'm not sure whether you want to say that the peak of cedar pollen has already passed or whether it will pass (eventually refers to the future).
  • Unfortunately, the amount of the cypress pollen this year seems 428 times more than the amount of last year.
  • Unfortunately, the amount of cypress pollen this year is 428 times greater than last year.
    　more is understandable but greater is better for uncountables (x times higher, greater, larger amount) (x times more cats, people) . (you do not need to repeat "amount")
  • Furthermore, this number is in Hachioji city, Tokyo, where I am living.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • It is said that the increase in pollen level is due to the rapid temperature rise at the end of March 2018.
  • It is said that the increase in pollen is due to the rapid temperature rise at the end of March this year.
  • It is very hard for me to spend this pollen season.
  • This pollen season will be very hard for me.
Toru
Thank you so much for the correction!
Sorry for the late reply.
No. 2　nagi's correction
  • Recently, I was surprised to watch news.
  • Recently, I was surprised to watch by something I saw on the news.
    　Note: Usually, we use "the" before "news" ("news" が名詞として使う場合)
  • Eventually the peak of cedar pollen has passed, but cypress pollen will likely hit its peak soon.
  • Eventually Finally, the peak of cedar pollen has passed, but cypress pollen will is likely to hit its peak soon.
  • Unfortunately, the amount of the cypress pollen this year seems 428 times more than the amount of last year.
  • Unfortunately, the amount of the cypress pollen this year seems appears to be 428 times more than the amount of last year.
    　If you use "seems," it sounds like it's your opinion. "appears" is better if it is based on some evidence.
  • Furthermore, this number is in Hachioji city, Tokyo, where I am living.
  • Furthermore, this number figure is in for Hachioji city, Tokyo, where I am living live.
  • It is said that the increase in pollen level is due to the rapid temperature rise at the end of March 2018.
  • It is said that the increase in pollen level is due to the a rapid temperature rise at the end of March 2018.
  • It is very hard for me to spend this pollen season.
  • It is I'm having a very hard time for me to spend with this pollen season.
アルピタットexα works well for me.
Toru
Thank you so much for the correction!
Sorry for the late reply.
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